Lost Meadows of Time

[Borrowed Wings]

Behind the lost meadows of time…
Lies a child…
From the center of her white, elaborate dress…
A blood spring pours onto the trees…
And the trees are alive…
Full of colorful flowers…
Full of hopes…
Full of desires…
Full of love…
A love that caused her demise…
That slaughtered her childish dreams…
Her emerald eyes flicker no more…
Her white skin radiate no light…
Her twisted curls no longer shine…
Her little fingers softly touch the prairie…
A sweet, gentle touch…
That livens the roots…
That makes the forest evergreen…
The trees grow all about her…
Their roots embrace her…
Their strong arms protect her…
Their foliage hides her from all spying eyes…
And she becomes the empathy of the forest…
Her blood is the foundation of existence…
Her beauty is the source of splendor…
But she grows no more…
Yet, I live on…
With the child murdered inside me…
A body… With no core…

Borrowed Wings

[~*~Melody~*~]

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Hi...
Borrowed wings...

Welcome.....

I'm very glad to see you here.....with this nice drifting flying
nickname

I loved your poem ....You have painted such a wonderful strong and effective picture , painted it with the colors of nature....of innocence....gained...& lost.

A wonderful deep write...

Thank you for sharing it with us
I hope you would keep up the good work...

Best wishes..
~~~~~~~~~~~

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[ROMEO]

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Firstable, I'd like to apologize to be so late in my replay4 such

an awesome master piece which made me astonished and

amazed due to the fabulous art paintings which can be found

in every word , also the genius mixing between the nature

and the human flesh ............



Borrowed Wings............

u've really inspired us so deaply with those harmonical words u've written high up in the farest skies while u were flying withy those talented wings...........

I hope u will let us observe one of ur imaginary scenes... next time .......

Remember ..... we all r waiting for those wings to lift us where u belong.........


at the end ...........we r honoured to have u here in the E Forum

We whish u feel comfortable with US


Bye

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[Borrowed Wings]

Hello Melody and Romeo

I am speechless...

I really don't kbnow what to say...

But ur words have touched a deep place in my heart ...

I thank you both so very much...

and I am glad to be a part of this virtical world where I can post my writings and share them with others...

I will be posting a new piece soon...

Sincerely

Borrowed Wings...