Hello dear Queen of Seas~
The story teaches a good lesson but I think it's wrong to write God says while he didn't really said these words.. You should change it a bit and yet still have the same meaning
:For example you can change the story like this
A little boy asked his mother (God have been
,around for a very long time so for him
(?how long is a thousand years
,So his mother answered (For his greatness
(a thousand years is only five minutes
,The boy asked again (And, for him
(?how much is a million dollars
The mother answers (For his greatness
(a million dollars is only five cents
The boy wounderd then said (Then can you ask
(?God to give me a million dollars
The mother looks at her child, smiles, and said
(Of course my son! Just wait five minutes)