تاريخ التسجيل :
Feb 2002
رقم العضوية : 2
الاقامة : مع كل انسان
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Hi angy
I really enjoy reading this terrific story
but i think it is romantic more than it can become real
and i think that you spend a long time showing us
the full detail of this store
so if you count how many `she` inside you story
you will find that you use it so many times
the reader want to know the idea of the story
without looking for the full details
so you can go straightly to your target of the story
without describing some unuseful things
Thanks a lot for this story
and keep going
Best Wishes
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