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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : When In Doubt



غدير
28-07-2002, 10:13 PM
When you feel sadness
and thoughts start to change
Remember our dreams
that we plan to arrange
When you're laying in bed
and just can't sleep
Feel my Heart
its your's to keep
Remember the smiles
and what they're about
Just focus on Fact
whenever in doubt
Anything else
is simply not real
Listen to your heart
it hears how I feel
And if you get tempted
and start debating
Be reminded again
for YOU...I am waiting
When thoughts run wild
and you start to wonder
The sun always shines
after all the thunder
And when it gets hard
and you want to give in
Despite all opponents
Love can win
Hold your head high
feel the Rain through the Drought
Remember my Love
whenever in doubt

Gadeer

ROMEO
29-07-2002, 06:42 AM
:star: :star: :star: :star: :star:

ROMEO
29-07-2002, 07:03 AM
A dromer in heaven opens wide

colourful spectra drowned in little pearls

that wrote thou name on skies tide

who may it be ....?

is it the shade of your lips..?

or may it be your twinkling glimpse

No doubt it is YOU poured down in thy soul

Your magical beauty wraped me and stole

every emotion which in my heart hewed out

Will sadness oppose me ...?

will sorrows dare hurt thee..?

thy love I won't ever let you go

Nor I'll start debating of how or so

as your divine rhythm will chant forever

and LOVE ICOn won't be deafeted ever

cause your spirit can heal thy pain

scatter my Drought by your love rain



By Romeo




with all my love

ROMEO
29-07-2002, 07:27 AM
Dear Gadeer welcome back again

we missed alot ur sweetest dew and extraordinary talent

this time u came with a more beautiful images,splendid atmosphers which kept Romeo soaring high up the LOVE 's HEAVEN

As a matter of fact , I read the poem so many times as it let the reader dive deeply inside the smooth lines and encourge his/her heart to believe in such ones of LOVE ETERNITY

(Y)
Gadeer my dear(Y)(Y)

Im really proud that ur pen reavels itsmost wonderful jewels while we set back and applause very hard 4 such creativity


welldone my dear and may Lord protect both ur soul and pen


with my regards

Romeo

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NOTE

this poem I should vote by 5 stars and let the whole topic been stabilized

Angel
29-07-2002, 11:46 AM
.Hi G

Very nice words, indeed

they surely deserve to be stabilized and to be put in درة المشاركات المتميزه

Good luck, hun

and keep up the good work..

غدير
04-08-2002, 01:07 PM
Hello Romeo & Angel
I'm really sorry for being late
( القرآن ) It's because I teach little girls how to read
"I dont know how to write it in Engilish"
And thanks for always reading my poems
And caring

Romeo
I'm so happy that you enjoyed reading it
Thanks

Angel
Hi my dear .. I'm glad you liked it
Thanks

Your Friend
Gadeer