Feelings

[MoStWaNtEd]

Why should I do anything for you.

And by the time you're not give me any clue.

I'm tiered to be just watchin over you.

And a blancman because of you.

When I intend to do something about this true.

I saw you...Then you scared me in the way that I don't know.

Will you please be kind and so blue.

And give me a sign to know what to do.

Be a gentle to a man he's fault is loving you.

I wrote all this down.

Because this load is more heavy than you.

[Petals]

I think we should bring you back to SA.loool

Who's the Unfortunate girl.looool

No, really.

I think there are some manageable mistakes

Any way the theme is good.

Now you want her to be blue (?)

Is it like an ocean deep or just blue, u know blue also means depressed (?)

Any way

Take Care

And Keep Writing

Petals.

[MoStWaNtEd]

Hey again

thank u fro being here

u think i should? hehehehe

look this is my first i put it here

About Blue

i mean the ocean is so deep and almost quiet

why do u think i want her blue ?

thx sis and don't worry i'll keep writing


PEACE

[Bent_al_Raffidain]

I know that time can never change the love I have for you..... Except to make it deeper still with everything we do...... In all my dreams of coming years, you play the greatest part, For I know that time will never change the love within my heart...

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[MoStWaNtEd]

nice Bent_al_Raffidain very nice

i like it :)

nice 2 c u here :)


PEACE

[عمر باعقيل]

MoStWaNtEd
i think its very strong words but i feel u attaked her too much in these words
how u want her to come back to u after these words
ithink its hard for her to come back
try to ask her forgaving

take care of ur self

[MoStWaNtEd]

hmm..

thx Hamss i'm honored 2 have u here :)

well let me tell u something Hamss

u ment in ur words that she run away from me

or left me but the true is I don't even know her

my feelings just hurts when she's all do is ignoring me

like she's never saw me

thx 4 ur opinion pal :)

PEACE

[~*~Melody~*~]

A nice heart-felt write...and it rhymes well, I must say. I'm sure you have done your very best to make it rhymes so wwonderfully.
Thank you for sharing it

[Bent_al_Raffidain]

Thanxxxx mostwanted...... |547| |547|

I dont know what hammed talking about,..he is right the words are realy hard,...so i think u have to us something where u can ask her for giving u..that is more better...

But if she realy ignoring u like u said Mostwanted,..so i think she wanna feel high or wanna show she is better than u,..so this is not polite,..if she realy loves u so she can JUST TRY, to give u one more chance,..ask her for that FACE 2 FACE,..and tell her to tell u the truth about her feelings for u...i hope that i am talikg from the same idea...:205:......




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[MoStWaNtEd]

~*~Melody~*~

thx 4 stepping by :)

ur words are the most wonderfull

thx again and i hope we c u here again :)


PEACE

[MoStWaNtEd]

Bent_al_Raffidain

thx 4 coming here again

what i like 2 say is..

first this is an imaginary girl :p

second I imagined a girl she don't know me and i don't know her (e.j like friends)

but i like her a lot and i want 2 show her how much i like her :)

third if this is a hrad like u and Hamss said, what about "End Of My Story"

u will kill me after u read it :)

thx again and I hope we c u piece 2 :)

PEACE

[Bent_al_Raffidain]

i realy wanna kill u "Mostwanted".......
so u gave me that feeling that u love her and she was in love with u but now she is ignoring u,.... oh god i will kill u realy.... :175:

Any way,... u will see me often here!!!!!! :218:

[MoStWaNtEd]

hehehe

u r most welcome :)

PEACE

[Bent_al_Raffidain]

:215:.....i know i am always welcome......:133:
Emze7....enshalle neshuf menek shai2 jedeed MOSTWANTED!!!!!!!

SEE yA....... :230:

[MoStWaNtEd]

Insha2 allah

thx :)

PEACE