مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : I See You Working Hard for Me
cutie
27-03-2005, 12:40 AM
hii everyone i'm new here and i hope to be welcomed ..i found this beautiful poem
about mothers and i wanted to share it with you
I see you working hard for me
And wonder what it means:
Whether I will do the same
And give up my own dreams
To offer someone else my world,
A stranger from my womb,
And say: Here, take my life,
So you, not I, can bloom.
I often wonder at the depth
Of that cool sacrifice;
I know it can't be "just because,"
Or simply to be nice.
It is so awesome, I can't think
How I could make that choice,
Except I see something in you
That gives my own heart voice.
I see sometimes a happiness
Amid the stressed-out day
That no one else can hope to know
In any other way.
I feel it when you look at me
And understand sometimes
That things I do, I do for two,
And then your hard life shines.
And when I give you grief, I know
That all the bitter pain
Between a mom and growing child
Is simply like the rain
That alternates with sunny days,
Passion without end,
While underneath is more of life
Than we can comprehend.
And then I know, perhaps, why I
Like you might be so moved
To give my life to someone else,
And know that I have loved.
Petals
27-03-2005, 01:22 AM
Howdy stranger :132: <-- using a southern accent
I just wanted first to welcome you here, and I'm thrilled that your very first words is here.
They kinda make me feel special :221:
Any way.
Bout the topic, Mom, we should put a mom topic here, and I'll be back after I'll read your words more deeper.
Take care honey, and it's always joyful having you here.
Petals.
cutie
27-03-2005, 02:58 PM
HOWDY:159: ..thanx for your nice words,,i really cant' wait to see your comment on the poem ,i'm sure you'll like it, its' a very expressive poem,i like the part when u mentioned the mother topic
Haymana
28-03-2005, 06:25 AM
Welcome to the club cutie
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Very nice poem , I like it
Beeing a mother is not just a word
You see there's giving up of dreams and much more
If we could think of it .. the moment a female is declared a mom , she gives up her entire life for the sake of her little ones :
To offer someone else my world,
A stranger from my womb,
And say: Here, take my life,
So you, not I, can bloom.
can't add to these
Thanks a lot for sharing this with us
Best wishes
Haymana
Petals
28-03-2005, 04:40 PM
And then I know, perhaps, why I
Like you might be so moved
To give my life to someone else,
And know that I have loved.
Hello again cutie..
This's the part I liked most.
Giving my life to someone, and knowing that I've been loved. I can cry for this :253:
Mamma you know that I love you.
Mamma you are the queen of my heart.
Your love is like tears fro the stars.
Mamma I just wanted you to know.
Loving you is like food to my soul.
BoyzIIMen
This topic, is pinned.
Hopefully each member will say something to their mom.
Again thanks
Haymana:
Being a mother is not just a word
It's just a whole other life. :181:
Hey girl.
I wanted to welcome you to the club :254:
Petals.
cutie
28-03-2005, 04:48 PM
Haymana,, thanx so much 4 ur lovely words ,i'm very happy u enjoyed the poem i like it when u said
If we could think of it .. the moment a female is declared a mom , she gives up her entire life for the sake of her little ones
i smell wisdom here:129:
cutie
28-03-2005, 05:08 PM
Petals babe ,,thanx for the nice words,,so happy to be with u in the same club..
hopefully evryone will say a couple of a nice words to the essence of life (mothers):133:
همس الشوق
28-03-2005, 05:46 PM
What can I say ,it is very nice topic and
great words as
well . The most part I liked ..is
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And then I know, perhaps, why I
Like you might be so moved
To give my life to someone else,
And know that I have loved
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Wonderful to someone who have warm
heart such as you cutie.
BeSt ReGaRdS to you & your MuM too;)
YoUr SiStEr HaMs AlShOg:129:
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ملكة البحار
31-03-2005, 11:46 AM
I forget all the words while I talk about her
She has all my life
and
I promise, you will be happy for(ME) for your daughter
Cutie
You made me Cray
Really nice poem
Thank you
صدى الالام
31-03-2005, 03:10 PM
Assalam 3laikum
hello everybody
I am new here also
and ur poem is the 1st i read
it's really touching
it affected me so much
i wrote these fragments just now
i hope all of u will like it
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to my mother
life is not worthy without u
I cant b happy when u r sad
it's true that ur tears would wash the whole evil from the world
But forgive me
I cant bear seeing u crying
Dear mum
Ur daughter appreciates all ur sacrifice
ur daughter wants 2 fulfill all ur dreams in life
ur daughter cant go on without ur smile, without ur being happy & content
please mum just give me a hug and show a smile
it would be the most strongest motive for me
to face life with all its drawbacks and suffering
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cutie
01-04-2005, 03:05 AM
HaMs AlShOg..Thanx honey for the sweet words..am happy to hear that u enjoyed the poem
MAMA says hiiii too:183:
cutie
01-04-2005, 03:10 AM
ملكة البحار
as long as people like u with such a soft heart exist in this world we r fine
u r right ..when it comes to mothers we r speachless|238|
cutie
01-04-2005, 03:18 AM
صدى الالام
welcome here honey ,,i'm new here too..this is my first subject,we r both lucky the club is full of nice people,,
the word u wrote r so beautiful too..keep it up:181:
Hiii cutie
I'm honestly happy to see ya here
How great to share such a feeling
mother,,mother,,mother
and what else
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HERE YOU
WHAT I'VE GOT
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When you came into the world, she held you in her arms.
You thanked her by wailing like a banshee.
When you were 1 year old, she fed you and bathed you.
You thanked her by crying all night long.
When you were 2 years old, she taught you to walk.
You thanked her by running away when she called.
When you were 3 years old, she made all your meals with love.
You thanked her by tossing your plate on the floor.
When you were 4 years old, she gave you some crayons.
You thanked her by coloring the dining room table.
When you were 5 years old, she dressed you for the holidays.
You thanked her by plopping into the nearest pile of mud.
When you were 6 years old, she walked you to school.
You thanked her by screaming, "I'M NOT GOING!"
When you were 7 years old, she bought you a baseball.
You thanked her by throwing it through the
next-door-neighbor's window.
When you were 8 years old, she handed you an ice cream.
You thanked her by dripping it all over your lap.
When you were 9 years old, she paid for piano lessons.
You thanked her by never even bothering to practice.
When you were 10 years old, she drove you all day, from
soccer to gymnastics to one birthday party after another.
You thanked her by jumping out of the car and never looking back.
When you were 11 years old, she took you and your friends to the movies.
You thanked her by asking to sit in a different row.
When you were 12 years old, she warned you not to watch certain TV shows.
You thanked her by waiting until she left the house.
Those teenage years
When you were 13, she suggested a haircut that was becoming.
You thanked her by telling her she had no taste.
When you were 14, she paid for a month away at summer camp.
You thanked her by forgetting to write a single letter.
When you were 15, she came home from work, looking for a hug.
You thanked her by having your bedroom door locked.
When you were 16, she taught you how to driver her car.
You thanked her by taking it every chance you could.
When you were 17, she was expecting an important call.
You thanked her by being on the phone all night.
When you were 18, she cried at your high school graduation.
You thanked her by staying out partying until dawn.
Growing old and gray
When you were 19, she paid for your college tuition,
drove you to campus, carried your bags.
You thanked her by saying good-bye outside the dorm so you wouldn't
be embarrassed in front of your friends.
When you were 20, she asked whether you were seeing anyone.
You thanked her by saying, "It's none of your business."
When you were 21, she suggested certain careers for your future.
You thanked her by saying, "I don't want to be like you."
When you were 22, she hugged you at your college graduation.
You thanked her by asking whether she could pay for a trip to Europe.
When you were 23, she gave you furniture for your first apartment.
You thanked her by telling your friends it was ugly.
When you were 24, she met your fiance and asked about your plans for the future.
You thanked her by glaring and growling, "Muuhh-ther, please!"
When you were 25, she helped to pay for your wedding, and she cried and told
you how deeply she loved you.
You thanked her by moving halfway across the country.
When you were 30, she called with some advice on the baby.
You thanked her by telling her, "Things are different now."
When you were 40, she called to remind you of an relative's birthday.
You thanked her by saying you were "really busy right now."
When you were 50, she fell ill and needed you to take care of her.
You thanked her by reading about the burden parents become to their children.
And then, one day, she quietly died. And everything you never did came
crashing down like thunder.
"Rock me baby, rock me all night long."
"The hand who rocks the cradle...may rock the world".
Let us take a moment of the time just to pay tribute/show appreciation to
the person called MOM though some may not say it openly to their mother.
There's no substitute for her. Cherished every single moment.
Though at times she may not be the best of friends, may not agree to our
thoughts, she is still your mother!!!
She will be there for you...to listen to your woes, your braggings, your
frustations, etc.
Ask yourself.....have you put aside enough time for her, to listen to her
"blues" of working in the kitchen, her tiredness???
Be tactful, loving and still show her due respect though you may have a
different view from hers.
Once gone, only fond memories of the past and also
regrets will be left
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3leel
همس المشاعر
12-04-2005, 04:21 AM
cutie
First of all, Welcome and it is great to have you in here
That's sweet .. really .. Keep going
Regards
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