When the Dream come true

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Hi all

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Tell me of the love you dream
And I'll tell you what it'll be
Tell me of the one you want
And I'll pray that it'll be me.

You made a world where dreams come true
Take me there so I can be with you
to hold you tight and be with you
Is the only dream I want to come true.

Sometimes I wonder
How it would be
If there were no you
Without you in my life
I would surely die
You mean that much to me
I could never lie.
I do believe that God above
Created you for me to love
And if we go our separate ways
I'll think of you till my dying day.

I sit here tonight
with thoughts of you.
Wishing you were here with me
like I always do.

I know that we will be together
again some day.
When that day comes we will have nothing but
smiles on our faces and our skies no longer grey.

In this time that we are apart,
I know that we are in one anothers heart.
We always will be,
just like we were from the start.

You are a part of me,
and I am a part of you.
That is something so special
and very true.

Your gentle touch
I miss so much.

I do know, when there is a will
there is a way.
I promise you we will be together
forever again one day.

Until then, always remember
that I love you forever.

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[ROMEO]

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dreams dreams of the shiny days

solo whisperes of hidden desires

no one like you taught me the real love

no one ever would be the beloved I dream of

except the one who lift me way up in remote skies

the one who could have me forever

my all senses would be prisoned for a single blink

oh my heart......how shill I reach your glamour.......?

why will I be the lonely soul when your are here....?

I searched for your love since the start

I faced the hardship that tore me apart

though to have you in my arms

to smell your magical fragrance

My love that's thy only dream


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Hi there pal..........

I should say that u caught my attention from the 1st time I saw ur little beauty, and frankly speaking I was astonished to this awesome ability u do have in E, along with the other wonderful talent in A ,that u r a real Master in........

so we won U in both......... rn't we lucky ..........?


thanks 4 coming dear....... and I'm looking forward 2 the next one that ur pen will write........


BYE



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[~*~Melody~*~]

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Hi ......

seeing you here and reading your lovely heartfelt poem is a real wonderful surprise.....

I found the openeing lines quite lovely...

"Tell me of the love you dream
And I'll tell you what it'll be
Tell me of the one you want
And I'll pray that it'll be me. "

Tell me of the love you want
and I'll give you mine unconditionally

Tell me of what you want to see
and I'd hope that I'd be your sky and your sea
that I'd be the picture hanged on your lashes
and you'd see me
eternally

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Quick few lines online that were provoked by your lines

Thank you for being here with your wonderful poem
I hope you'd allow us to see more of the English poet in you
and dream with you of poems written and would be written soon
and we'd have the previlige of reading them

Thank you

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Dear Romeo
feelings has no language , its just tried and I hope its good.
I realy don't know way I wrote in English. i just hold my pen and started.
thanks a lote for what u sed and I hope I deserve it
And bay the way, my talent is nothing comparing to u.

have a nice day


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Dear Charm( Melody), pick a name
Its realy an honour to be in this page and to be instructed by u and Romeo, writing in English is one of my favorite
To tell the truoth, I didn't find someone who make me feel that i did Somthing good :p, just kidding

Any way it was nice to try and more nicer to take your reacting on it and soon (insha'allah) i'll try again.

thanx a lote for ur compliment and your care.

Best wishes

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