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الموضوع: *Her Legend*

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    الصورة الرمزية Angel
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    *Her Legend*





    [c]
    A blood spring pours down heavily
    Forming streams of reddish fluid
    Over white skin
    It floods down
    And splashes over the transparent tiles
    Telling the story
    Of a love once existing
    But now covered with dust
    In the middle of a forest
    In a grave of flesh

    It pours down peacefully
    And as it stretches out
    It draws the legend
    That has never been told
    It unfolds a marvel
    Of a struggling little girl
    Who once loved
    A handsome little boy

    Her love was everlasting
    Her dreams reached the clouds
    Her eyes spoke of love
    As her heart tuned its beats
    She soared with the birds
    And glided with the angels
    In the sky of her imaginings

    She held his hand
    She caressed his hair
    And touched his skin
    She told him she loves him
    And showed him she does
    She never left him
    For anybody else

    But all dreams have to be crushed by reality
    And all stories come to an end

    She said her last good-bye
    And left him in the dust
    The tears left her eyes
    And streamed down her face
    She couldn’t bare the loss
    She couldn’t save her love
    She looked at him for the last time
    And memorized his looks
    She memorized the tiny hairs
    Which grow about his face

    And now she lies in the pool
    Of the blood which left her chest
    And in the forests in her eyes
    She can see him and smile
    The twinkle in his eyes speak of a great love
    The twitch around his lips speak of his worship
    She reached out her hand
    And with her blood drew a heart
    And in the middle of it she drew
    The initials of his name and hers
    She struck it with a bow
    And sent it to his heart
    She begged him to take her home
    She wanted to be by his side
    But her door has long been locked
    She cried for him, she moaned

    As she awaits her death
    She kisses him a gentle kiss
    She holds his hands
    And tells him
    How much she wants him back
    She looks into the blackness
    Into his loving eyes
    She veils her face and leaves him
    To the skies up above

    And in his home he’s waiting
    For her to take her place
    He awaits her return
    With his passionate ache
    And draws her smile in the horizon
    And sends his kisses with the winds
    He sends her unhanded messages
    With all the flying birds
    He tells her how he loves her
    And how he misses her touch

    But little does he know
    His love killed the girl
    When her parents locked her door
    She couldn’t bare the loss
    She wanted him or nothing
    But little could she do
    She brought a knife and with it
    She pierced her aching heart
    And as her blood poured down
    It drew the story above
    It tried to reach her lover
    To inform him of his loss
    But the boundaries which are standing
    Between their two homes
    Stood like a huge wall
    To separate their entwined souls

    He will wait forever
    For her to come his way
    But she’ll watch him from above
    And send her tears as rain
    And with her eyes she’ll cast
    The sunshine in his way…

    [/c]
    بحكي لك أجمل حكاية



    The shortest distance between a problem and a solution is the distance between your knees and the floor
    !The one who kneels to God can stand up to anything

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    [l]Angel

    What a touchy poem! I can’t say anything except a wonderful one

    I’ve read it twice and I’ll read more to learn more from it

    There are many lessons appearing in this poem and I believe much more are hidden behind its lines [/l]
    khuder

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    الصورة الرمزية Angel
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    [l]

    Hello Khuder

    Thank you for your sweet comment

    I am really glad you liked it

    Thank you

    [/l]

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    الصورة الرمزية ROMEO
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    I'll be back

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    الصورة الرمزية Angel
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    :095:

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    [l]Hi Angel

    I used to tell one of my friends, your poems are more like movies rather than poems and I’m seeing the same in this poem now

    Her legend is a movie scenarios have been put together in a poetry like pattern

    As you start reading it you can see the scenes of these scenarios in your mind just like you are sitting in a theater watching a movie

    The accurate sequence of the events and the incredible use of analogies are picturing the views in the reader’s mind as exactly as he is attending a live show

    Such a talent shouldn’t be kept on ****ves to be buried by dust; it should be exposed to the lights to find its proper place somewhere up on the summit

    Thank you for posting it to have me enjoy reading it 4 times until this moment [/l]

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    الصورة الرمزية Angel
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    Hello Khuder, again

    Once again, your words make me a bit concieved

    You make me feel like I am a very good writer, everyone has to read my poems

    But the fact is: Poetry is much like anything beautiful in this world.. You might like something and see it is the most beautiful thing in the world.. But someone else might not see the same thing you are seeing

    Thank you for what you have said

    and by the way, I am working on publishing my first book

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    الصورة الرمزية ROMEO
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    Angelena




    [C]

    Hi there our beloved sis and distinguished member

    sorry 4 being late

    --------------

    Her Legend will last forever
    --------


    those lines carried my senses beyond horizons

    and gave me no chance but 2 wonder in such a marvelous flow of beauty

    welldone dear sis and I wish u the best whether in ur gifted poetic talent , or in the ur new book

    (Will u send us a copy........?;)


    take care dear sis

    [/C]

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    الصورة الرمزية Angel
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    Hello Romeo

    You finally arrived

    Thanks for your sweet words

    Believe me.. You will all know if my book ever gets published

    Just wait and see

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