Test your writing skills

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Hi Sami
Many thanks dear
Okay brother I will rewrite but in another way like shadow

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.My weekends are fast and enjoy
. My weekdays are busy
.I get up at 9.00 I make breakfast Then I go to the gym
. On Sunday I go shopping
On Tuesday I **** dinner but not every day because I Don’t like *****ng ..Fortunately my mother is *****ng always
.On Thursday I visit my grandfather
On weekends I usually relax but sometimes I visit friends.
Usually on Friday I go out



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your sister
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[Sami96SA]

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Hanan

Thank you for revisiting and trying to practice

First of all, you should know that to practice writing, you have to adhere to some of the writing rules; one of them is to write in paragraphs, not a sentence in each line

Let's first put it all together

My weekends are fast and enjoy . My weekdays are busy. I get up at 9.00 I make breakfast Then I go to the gym. On Sunday I go shopping. On Tuesday I **** dinner but not every day because I Don't like *****ng ..Fortunately my mother is *****ng always .On Thursday I visit my grandfather. On weekends I usually relax but sometimes I visit friends
Usually on Friday I go out


If I would write it, it would be like this


My weekend goes fast because it is enjoyable and relaxing especially on Friday when I get to see my friends or just go out. I visit my grandfather on Thursday. I get so busy during my weekdays. I get up at 9, make breakfast, then I go to the gym to practice. On Sunday, I normally go shopping, and on Tuesday I **** dinner. I don't **** everyday because I hate *****ng and my mother
fortunately ****s for us.


Generally, you did better than last time. Keep up practicing and someday you will not need anybody to correct your writings for you


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Sami


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