an oridinary girl

[cutie]

a very special hi to all of you

i wrote those words a long time ago

and i'd like to share it with all of you

hope you like it

She is nothing special in fact

She's just an ordinary girl

She don’t know how to cheat or lie

Or even how to act

Trying to build her life in this hopeless world

She is using a rose as a gun instead of a sword

She is not a loser as they say

She never listens to a word they say

Those ugly people are calling her

The girl that is building a castle in the air

The cruel words are braking her to pieces

All the dreams

And plans

Replaced by hatred and fears

But she didn't care

She put her painful moments in her sadness chest

And forever lost its key

Hiding her tears behind those dark eyes

She told herself :

They laughed at me today, but I swear they'll cry another day

They'll pay

For I'll start a brand new day

There will be no time for me to play

I'll keep on trying and trying

To the last chapter in my life

Then I'll stand up there

Watching the moon

Counting the days and nights

Waiting for the harvest season

Knowing that it will come soon

dear friends remember that i wrote as a beginner

and i'm still a beginner

[cutie]

not even a word

!!

[Petals]

Hi cutie, don't worry, it's like a ghost town here sometimes but it's all good in the end.

Well, I'll talk about the idea of the ordinary girl, when she's actually not

Abandon, I thought when you say:

They laughed at me today, but I swear they'll cry another day

That she's gonna change, but she actually was aiming on their self-regret!

"Hell is others" as Sartre said once, and I believe in that.

Take care my friend.

[cutie]

hi petals

thx sweetie for passin' by

somehow i got the feeling u would be the first one to comment

where is everyone here?

..

about the ordinary girl,i think her brand new day and her eagerness to the harvest season is enough to prove that she gonna change her attitude towards life

[mohamed8]

sometimes the person feel that u feel with

[نينجا]

Dear Cutie
Sweet words you wrote there, and no I don't think you're a beginner at all
In fact, some lines are nicely done and well put

Keep it up

[ابوغروب]

in the name of allah

...

..hi cute ur so cute

nice words &nice feeling

but .. u dont need to make any one cray if anyone lughe on u that s make qusiton why they do?..!! u

must keep ur heart clean

keep go cute

i hope one day u'll smile

try to forget that s over

now

with my best wiches

[cutie]

mohamed8.. thx bro for ur words , i believe that if u get the readers to feel wat u wrote u actually touched some thing inside them.

نينجا...wow i never once had a ninja to comment on my writings before
thx bro for the lovely words and passing by


ابو غروب..thx bro for passing ..
when u said:

but .. u dont need to make any one cray if anyone lughe on u that s
sometimes u cant' stop urself from having negative feelings..u just cant' help it
but as u said "clean heart" is wat really matters
after all it's just a piece of writing
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