End of My Story

[MoStWaNtEd]

[align=left]I look at you and I feel sick
I look at you and I regret
Stop! I can't look at you
You feel pride when I look at you
I thought you'll understand this look in my eyes
Or understand this feelings inside
I have a cause to look at you
You have a wide beautiful eyes
Capture me deep deep inside
I just hit around like i get high
It's feels like flying over the sky
Swimming with birds and clouds
I sought around these beautiful eyes
It's tells me alot about your life
There's a misery hide behind these eyes
It's fills with mysteries and cries
Alot of secrets you hide from people like I
It's sotles the glow from your eyes
But I don't care and I'm not wondring why
You just hurt my feelings inside
By ignoring me all the time
And not give my a chance to say hi
Thank god a few friends of mine
Took me from this darkness side
Helped me and brought me to life
Befor I lose my mind
Now I know you'll never be mine
Now my wounds will be healed
It's looks like I'm saved
From a devil in human shape
Ignoring his favorite game
And closing doors on people face
It's like a duty fate
But you know! forgetten is a bliss
Its a solution for problem like this
Do you think you'll be always in my mind?
Swimming around in my thoughts?
I'll write everything in my chest
It's another way to forget this
Step by step I'll put you in the recycle bin
And put to this story an END[/align]

[Petals]

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It's looks like I'm saved
From a devil in human shape

I like this, don't know why
remember a song called So Could

" you are like a devil in disguised "

Nice bro

Keep doing it, but keep focusing.

Petals.[/align]

[MoStWaNtEd]

Hey sis

At last someone here 2 read my tries

thank u sis

i hope someone come 2 and read it

i still have more but i won't

put it here until everybody see it



PEACE

[Sami96SA]

[align=left]I look at you and I feel sick

I look at you and I regret

Stop! I can't look at you

You feel pride when I look at you

I thought you'll understand this look in my eyes

Or understand this feelings inside

I have a cause to look at you

You have a wide beautiful eyes

Capture me deep deep inside

I just hit around like i get high

It's feels like flying over the sky

Swimming with birds and clouds

I sought around these beautiful eyes

END[/align]

Most Wanted

I am not an expert in poetry but your attempt captured my attention. This could be a beautiful song

You're talented and have wide imagination.

[MoStWaNtEd]

well thank u Sami96SA

it's a pleasure to have u here

thank u again

PEACE