!!..Correct .. Or else

[همس المشاعر]

Salam, Every Body

How are you All ?? and how is it goin with you all

In fact I came here with a new idea.. I don't know

.if you will like it or not, But any way I think it is good

Here is what I got

It is almost a game .. with some benefits

Every body comes here.. writes a sentence with a wrong .. whatever it was .. but it is important to contains a wrong

Then next one who comes should correct the wrong of the previous one

.AND it will be GREAT if the reason was mentioned

and so and so .. Over and over

And one more thing .. if you want to write something

and you don't know how or you think it would be wrong

.as you wrote it .. you can just Drag-and-Drop it here

AND we will all help you to get out of your Proplemoo

Well .. Every body .. Come and MOOOVe

[همس المشاعر]

Here i am

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I has a name



what's wrong;)

[Sami96SA]

This is a wonderful way of improving English. It may not be the best especially if people treat it as if it was a game, but generally, it is as good as the person who thought of it and posted it. Thank you for doing so

My only suggestion is that to make this exercise even more interesting, we should write longer sentences than the one you started with. I will do it as a starter after I correct your sentence

It should be

I have a name

Now my grammatically incorrect sentence is

As I was driving to Riyadh last week, I almost hit a camel when it had crossed the road suddenly

Good luck to whoever will be one next

[Sami96SA]

Dear Hams

I am disappointed that no one has shown interest in participating in this wonderful excercise. I guess people are busy with Eid holidays

Give them sometime, maybe they will show up eventually

[Petals]

[align=center]Hey Hamso

Sorry, you know how things get so cold here.
I was going to raise some of the old subjects.

Oh well, whatever.

Thanks for your efforts.

Hey Sami, welcome back.
Tell me, Where were you when the lights went off (?)

Salam

Petals[/align]

[ملكة البحار]

Hello Hams

That's a good idea

Nice Topic, it is very useful

It will help us to interesting and learning English

Your exercise was very simple

But Sami sentence not easily as much as yours

Maybe it requires a high level in English or maybe I'm stupid

Hope someone answer it

Thanks

[همس المشاعر]

Well .... Mr. Sami

We all raise our hands.. and ask you to decrease the level of your Sentence

so.. we can mooooooove




WELCOME EVERY BODY

[همس المشاعر]

Hi .. Mr. Sami

you wrote

As I was driving to Riyadh last week, I almost hit a camel when it had crossed the road suddenly

I think it should be

As I was driving to Riyadh last week, I almost hit a camel when it had suddenly crossed the road

Wish I am right

[جمال الروح]

..hi every body
how are u all ? i hope everybody is fine

i came right here with a simple sentence

so anybody can answer it without alots of thinking unlike sami's sentence

i just saw my old friend in the garden

what's wrong with this sentsence?

to help u more .. there is a word missing .. and another word in the sentence needs to be corrected

good luck

jamal al roo7

[همس المشاعر]

Well ... that's Good

:it should be like this

I've just saw my old friend in the garden



You know what for a the first time I saw it

i just saw my old friend in the garbeg

LoL

I thought it would be a cat eating some meats in there

;)


Thanks

[جمال الروح]

hi again ..

it seems that we are asking and answering ourselves and no one else wants to share athough it's a nice topic

maybe they hate grammer hams

anyway let's return to our sentence

there is a small mistake hams

i have just (seen) my old friend in the garden

because after (have) the verb should be in the past perfect tense not the simple past

thanks for sharing

best rgards

jamal al roo7

[همس المشاعر]

oops..!! ya really you are right I've forgotten to correct the verb.

Thanks for correcting ,, and well

Let's get with another sentence



The student did answering the questions


Find the Wrong

waiting for you

[Areej]

Hi every one..

actually i came here by chance,, but I'll be glad to share this Game

First of all, I'd like to correct Sami's Sentence

I think it should be:

As I was driving to Riyadh last week, I almost hit a camel when it was crossing the road suddenly

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and by the way,, I feel that the word (suddenly) is located in a wrong position or in other words should be canceled,, o Allah A3lam

My sentence is:

Cells , the structural and functional units that make up human body, surrounded by cell membrane

It's almost a fragment

GOOD LUCK

..

.

AREEJ

[جمال الروح]

back again

first, i wanna correct hams' sentence
it sould be like that :

the student did answer the questions

and u areej i will not correct ur sen let's wait for another one to correct it ..

hey come on it's dead easy don't be confused by this long and complex sentence .. that's because my sis is studying pharmacy

good luck for u all

jamal al roo7

[همس المشاعر]

Areej ... What the .... First it is not a pharmacy test in here

:p

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Second .. Don't bypass the last sentece with newer one

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Third, You are welcome in here

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And finally, For God Sakes .. find us something works in here

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We are not pharmacy students

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see ya