!!..Correct .. Or else

[Sami96SA]

Hi everyone

I am sorry I had to be away this long. I also want to apologize for the sentence that seemed a bit hard to correct to some of you and I appreciate our friends who attempted to correct. It looks like I still need to present the correction

I wrote

As I was driving to Riyadh last week, I almost hit a camel when it had crossed the road suddenly

It should be

As I was driving to Riyadh last week, I almost hit a camel when it crossed the road suddenly

I removed "had" as the past participle indicates a slower action than that which was described by the adverb "suddenly"

I would like to correct Areej's sentence if it's ok with everyone

Areej wrote

Cells , the structural and functional units that make up human body, surrounded by cell membrane

First correction:

Cells, the structural and functional units that make up human body, are surrounded by cell membranes

Second correction:

Cells which are the structural and functional units that make up human body are surrounded by cell membranes

If my answer is correct, I would like you to correct this sentence

The fact that girls are smarter than boys are not true at all

Good Luck

[جمال الروح]

hi everybody

how are u all

ur correction is absolutely right sami

then let me correct ur sentence

it should be like that:

the fact that girls are smarter than boys is not true

that's because the word fact is singular so the verb sould be is because it is related to the word fact not the girls

hope i'm right

best regards

jamal al roo7

[Sami96SA]

Jamal

Good afternoon to you and to veryone

Your correction is right. Thank you

We are waiting for your incorrect sentence

[جمال الروح]

good afternoon

I'm so sorry sami i forgot to put another sentence:295:

here it is

i'm looking forward to see you in the cinema

;)

tell me what's wrong with this :rolleyes:


good luck

jamal al roo7

[Sami96SA]

Good morning Jamal

I know the answer, but I would rather give a chance to others until Saturday. If noboy tries, then I will come back and correct your sentence

Until then, wish you a nice weekend

[همس المشاعر]

well

Every body, I think I will correct

:I think it should be

i'm looking forward to seeing you in the cinema

:my sentence is a simple one

" I think you should correct this sentences "

Yala mooove every body

[همس المشاعر]

EXCUSE me .. But is it really hard

Well..... I'll make some changes

" I think you should correct this sentences "

COME on Buddies .. it is really simple !! moove

[جمال الروح]

hiii

i don't think it's hard hams ..

:it should be like that


I think you should correct this sentence

or we can say

I think you should correct these sentences


well .. let's think about another sentence ... mmmmm

as i walked in the street, i saw a terrible accident


good luck for everybody

[همس المشاعر]

as i walked in the street, i saw a terrible accident
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:I think it should be

as I was walking in the street, i saw a terrible accident

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?? is it true

[همس الشوق]

?Hi HaMs where is your sentence

I'll come back later

[همس المشاعر]

لأ لأ لأ ... بصراحة كده ما يصير

أنا أشوف المسابقة و كأنها حكر على فردين أو ثلاثة أفراد فقط

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نفتقد مشاركة كثير من الأعضاء هنا منهم من مر مرور الكرام

سلم و مشي

أتمنى مشاركة كل رواد هذه الدرة و أخص

ـ ملكة البحار ـ

ـ بيتالز ـ

ـ هيمانة ـ

ـ روميو ـ

ـ أريج ـ

والجميع بلا استثناء

تحية

[جمال الروح]

ya it's true hams ..

now give us another sentnece..


but i will not answer it .. i will wait for another one to
answer

so come onnn everybody

best wishes

jamal al roo7

[همس المشاعر]

Correct

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" ??How long has you been here "

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Waiting for NEW faces in here

[همس المشاعر]

???Is it that hard to be sloved